Feedback questions
학생이 쓴 원문
I always appreciate your feedback.
questions!!
1) I think office uniform is both good and bad.
>> I think wearing office uniforms can be both good or bad.
Q: possible to use OR after BOTH?
2) The food was really satisfactory.>satisfying.
Q) dictionary says
Satisfactory: good enough for a particular purpose
Satisfying : giving pleasure
But I still couldn't catch the subtle difference!!! Let me know^^
3)The occurrence of an accident is not likely to happen.: Is occurence and happen redundant ? I can't translate it well.
Accidents are not likely to happen.
4)The possibility(chance) of the occurence of an accident is very low.
So please don't be that worried and DON'T (can obmit?)make yourself tense(strained)
5) I met my friend for a while.(Meaning I think: I met my friend for some duration of hours) I wanted to mean: It's been a long time since we met.
are there any expressions using while?
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for making me check on that.
I failed to give appropriate corrections on some of the sentences.
I am sorry.
I\'ll do my best to be better next time.
I tried to review the sentences and here are corrections
which are more precise than before.
See you later! (\",)
T.Jackie
I think office uniform is both good and bad.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> I think that wearing office uniforms can either be good or bad.
The food was really satisfactory.
>> The food was really satisfactory based on my taste.
OR
>> The food was really satisfying.
(We use satisfactory when a certain requirement or criterion is achieved or met.)
For example:
The performance of the dancers was very satisfactory, based on the criteria set by the judges.
The occurrence of an accident is not likely to happen.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Accidents are unlikely to happen.
OR
>> Accidents are not likely to happen.
Is occurrence and happen redundant ?
>> Is it not redundant if I use occurrence and happen in a sentence.
The possibility(chance) of the occurence of an accident is very low.
>> There is a very low possibility for accidents to occur.
OR
>> The chance for the occurrence of accidents is very low.
So please don\'t be that worried and DON\'T (can obmit?)make yourself tense(strained)
>> So please stop worrying and making yourself feel tensed.
OR
>> So please do not be worried or tensed.
I met my friend for a while.
>> I met my friend after a long while.
OR
>> I met my friend after quite a long time.
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