feeding
학생이 쓴 원문
As far as I know, most of animal feed is made dead fishes.
So even it was made the dead tuna, it will not be harmful to them.
It seems like a waste of food, I feel sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Yes, Agree with you. However, on this matter, even if gghey have a purpose, we are simply thinking \" that is tuna\", such a waste. I hope the international law will undergo an amendment.
Aki~
As far as I know, most of animal feed is made dead fishes.
>>>As far as I know, most of the animal feed is made from dead fish.
So even it was made the dead tuna, it will not be harmful to them.
>>> So even if it were made from a dead tuna, it will not be harmful to them.
It seems like a waste of food, I feel sorry.
>>> I just feel sorry because it is a waste of food.
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