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2020-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Joylin

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my elder son calls me i.m very happy he and I very similar it seems to be present to me when we talk about i.m heart war[이름]g

Hi [이름].

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When writing sentences, make sure to use the right punctuation.

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my elder son calls me i.m very happy he and I very similar it seems to be present to me
when we talk about i.m heart war[이름]g

>> My elder son calls me. I\'m very happy because we are very similar. It seems to be a present to me when we talk about it. It is heart war[이름]g.

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