Feeling

2021-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

Oh, I don\'t remember at all. We met when my age was 28, and we got married after a few months. I didn\'t have a time to feel such feeling because of late marriage. My generation thought that marriage was a must, so I did, too. However, I think I have lived happy because of my husband and my children, though I couldn\'t have such feeling.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework everyday, you always make me smile with your experiences. It\'s fun to read stories like this. Stay well ~

~Aki :)

Oh, I don\'t remember at all.

>>> CORRECT

OR>>> I can\'t remember anything at all.
We met when my age was 28, and we got married after a few months.

>>> W e met when I was 28 and got married after a few months.
I didn\'t have a time to feel such feeling because of late marriage.

>>> I didn\'t have such feelings because of marrying late.
My generation thought that marriage was a must, so I did, too.

>>> During my generation, marriage was a must so I did it too.

However, I think I have lived happy because of my husband and my children, though I couldn\'t have such feeling.

>>> However, I think I have lived a happy life because of my husband and my children. Though I haven\'t had such feeling.

>>> However, I think I have lived happily because of my husband and my children. Though I never experienced such feeling,

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