Feeling pressure about my future
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Ab[이름]utely i do. Because in case of my country, there are some stereotypes about age, like you have to get married at least 30 years old, have to be with child a few years old, have to own your own house etc. Of course these things are broken down a lot these days. But they are still existed. So that’s a lie that i don’t feel any pressure but i’m trying to get away from these social standards.
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Ab[이름]utely i do.
>> Ab[이름]utely yes.
Because in case of my country, there are some stereotypes about age, like you have to get married at least 30 years old, have to be with child a few years old, have to own your own house etc.
>> Here in my country, stereotyping is very common, people will tell you a lot of things like that you should get married at the age of 30, have a kid, your own house, and a lot more.
Of course these things are broken down a lot these days. But they are still existed.
>> These things are slowly becoming unpopular but they still exist to some.
So that’s a lie that i don’t feel any pressure but i’m trying to get away from these social standards
>> So, it would be a lie if I said that I don\'t feel any pressure, but, I am trying to distance myself from these social standards.
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