Felt Lucky
학생이 쓴 원문
I felt so lucky when I went to the middle school I wanted to go.
Now, my middle school is Yongi middle school.
It was very famous school and most students wanted to go to here.
It was competition for us.
However, sadly, my friends went to another school.
I felt lucky, but on the one hand, I was sad.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s good for us to continue working hard.
We are shooting for something better than we are now.
Never give up.^^
~ Teacher Sharon
I felt so lucky when I went to the middle school I wanted to go.
>> I felt so lucky when I got into the middle school I wanted to go.
Now, my middle school is Yongi middle school.
Now, my middle school is Yongi middle school.
>> Now, my middle school is called Yongi Middle School.
It was very famous school and most students wanted to go to here.
It was very famous school and most students wanted to go to here.
>> It was a very famous school and most students wanted to come here.
It was competition for us.
It was competition for us.
>> It was a competition for us.
However, sadly, my friends went to another school.
However, sadly, my friends went to another school.
>> Correct
I felt lucky, but on the one hand, I was sad.
I felt lucky, but on the one hand, I was sad.
>> I felt lucky but I was also sad.
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