Fences and Neighbors
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Hi sir,
We should respect the privacy of other people but like you said because of this, we tend to put emotional barriers too which leads to indifference often. In the olden times, each person in the community have their own duty to do. Everybody help each other to gather and hunt for food then everyone in the community divide it equally. Life maybe simple then but they are contented. See you later sir!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Good fences make good neighbors?
>>correct!
Opinions on this are sharply divided into two groups.
>>Opinions on this is sharply divided into two groups.
That\'s right! Privacy is respected.
>>correct!
Other opinion is that physical barrier put some distance emotionally between neighbors.
>>correct!
There was no physical barrier in community life.
>>correct!
At that time, people had lived all life together.
>>At that time, people had lived all their life together.
But since people started a settlement life, they need to have a personal territory.
>>correct!
They built a fence around the house and the farm.
>>correct!
A fence symbolizes the physical barrier.
>>correct!
The physical barrier puts emotionally some distances.
>>The physical barrier puts some emotional distance.
In modern times, it is so called privacy.
>>correct!
In hunting-gathering era, is there no privacy?
>>In the hunting-gathering era, is there no privacy?
How did people live a community life?
>>correct!
Privacy and physical barrier should be a balance.
>>Privacy and physical barrier should be balanced.
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