Field of my study

2013-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Experiments of measurement conditions for nondestructive diagnosis of cultural heritages 2. Ultrasonic measurement : Evaluation of strength and weathering grade of stone cultural heritages 3. Infrared thermography : Detection, quantitative modeling and conservation treatment analysis of blistering zone 4. 3D analysis : Digital restoration, displacement analysis, surface depth modeling , 3D deterioration rate 5. Behavioral monitoring : Analysis of behavioral characteristics by tiltmeter sensors 6. P-XRF : Component analysis and contour modeling of surface contaminants and traditional pigments 7. Deterioration map : Making of deterioration map, calculation of crack index and deterioration rate 8.Analysis of Mineralogical and geochemical characteristics of stone, soil and pottery 9.Analysis using polarizing microscope, scanning electron microscope,XRD and XRF 10. Provenance presumption of stone cultural heritage using mineralogical and geochemical characteristics

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sir [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! Well, this is related with your field of study. It\'s quite complicated. Anyway, I think it\'s written perfectly because you just enumerated the processes to be done. I don\'t think it needs further improvement because it\'s already well-written. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ 1. Experiments of measurement conditions for nondestructive diagnosis of cultural heritages>> Correct 2. Ultrasonic measurement : Evaluation of strength and weathering grade of stone cultural heritages>> Correct 3. Infrared thermography : Detection, quantitative modeling and conservation treatment analysis of blistering zone>> Correct 4. 3D analysis : Digital restoration, displacement analysis, surface depth modeling , 3D deterioration rate>> Correct 5. Behavioral monitoring : Analysis of behavioral characteristics by tiltmeter sensors>> Correct 6. P-XRF : Component analysis and contour modeling of surface contaminants and traditional pigments>> Correct 7. Deterioration map : Making of deterioration map, calculation of crack index and deterioration rate>> Correct 8.Analysis of Mineralogical and geochemical characteristics of stone, soil and pottery>> Correct 9.Analysis using polarizing microscope, scanning electron microscope,XRD and XRF>> Correct 10. Provenance presumption of stone cultural heritage using mineralogical and geochemical characteristics >> Correct

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