Field Trip
학생이 쓴 원문
I will go to field trip on Thursday.It will be Goreyu University.It is the third best university in Korea.My teacher grauted that university.It will be a little exciting.Food wil be tasty.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Enjoy your field trip!
Tell me about what you\'re going to learn about the place or that university.
I think it\'s a famous university because it\'s the third best. ^^
See you soon!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I will go to field trip on Thursday.
>> I will go on a field trip on Thursday.
It will be Goreyu University.
>> It will be in Goryeo University.
It is the third best university in Korea.
>> correct
My teacher grauted that university.
>> My teacher graduated in that university.
It will be a little exciting.Food wil be tasty.
>> It will be a little bit exciting and the food will be tasty.
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