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2018-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hello! Teacher Lynn :) Thank you for teaching kindly meaning of Inauspicious. Thanks to your helping, I totally inderstood it. I received punishment both at school and home. At school, i was punished by teacher with wood stick. She hit my thigh, hip and palm when I didn't do my homework and I didn't get sign of my mom on my report card. Also at home. I often received punishment when I was young. My mom did hate lying. Nevertheless, I often did lie and my mom hit my palm whenever I do. Because I hated to be hit, I promised that I will never lie again. In that sense, I think punishment is essential because people won't be improved without it.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
\"Train up a child in the way he should go,
And when he is old he will not depart from it.\"
~Proverbs 22:6
That\'s from the Bible. Just like you, I believe that children should be punished or rewarded when needed. That is what should parents and teachers do.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Hello! Teacher Lynn :)
>> correct!
Thank you for teaching kindly meaning of Inauspicious.
>>
Thank you for teaching kindly the meaning of inauspicious.
Thanks to your helping, I totally inderstood it.
>> Thanks to your help, I totally understood it.
I received punishment both at school and home.
>> correct!
At school, i was punished by teacher with wood stick.
>>
At school, I was punished by my teacher with a wooden stick.
She hit my thigh, hip and palm when I didn\'t do my homework and I didn\'t get sign of my mom on my report card.
>>
She hit my thigh, hip and palm when I didn\'t do my homework and I didn\'t get my mom\'s signature on my report card.
Also at home. I often received punishment when I was young.
>>I also received punishment at home when I was young.
My mom did hate lying.
>> correct!
Nevertheless, I often did lie and my mom hit my palm whenever I do.
>> correct!
Because I hated to be hit, I promised that I will never lie again.
>> correct!
In that sense, I think punishment is essential because people won\'t be improved without it.
>> correct!

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