Fila and Nike is so Pretty!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
It depends on the situation, but first of all, Fila is the prettiest for clothes, and I think Nike is the best for sneakers. Fila\'s clothes are pretty, also BTS recently shot an advertisement for Fila clothes and sneakers. Also, Nike is the best for sneakers. They have a pretty design, are not easily torn, and do not get dirty easily. I always look for comfort and design, regardless of whether the clothes or sneakers are Fila or Nike. Fila\'s clothes are really pretty, and Nike\'s sneakers are so comfortable and pretty. I\'ll post a BTS FILA advertisement with a picture! It\'s so pretty!!><
P.S. The First picture is my picture, that sneakers are Nike\'s.
The Second picture is BTS FILA advertisement!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Maria!
It seems that you have a very good taste when it comes to sporty fashion. Sneakers are for almost everyday wear when you have to go out so it is good to make sure that they are durable, comfortable, and tidy.
When I looked at those photos above, specially your own choice of sneakers, it makes me want to go outside! Well, I have not worn one in a long time.
Anyway, thanks for clarifying the question in class today. I will see you again tomorrow for more discussion about uniforms.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
The Second picture is BTS FILA advertisement!
Fila\'s clothes are pretty, also BTS recently shot an advertisement for Fila clothes and sneakers.
>> Correct!
Also, Nike is the best for sneakers.
>> Correct!
They have a pretty design, are not easily torn, and do not get dirty easily.
>> Correct!
I always look for comfort and design, regardless of whether the clothes or sneakers are Fila or Nike.
>> I always look for comfort and design, regardless of whether they are clothes or sneakers from Fila or Nike.
Fila\'s clothes are really pretty, and Nike\'s sneakers are so comfortable and pretty.
>> Correct!
I\'ll post a BTS FILA advertisement with a picture! It\'s so pretty!!><
>> Correct!
P.S. The First picture is my picture, that sneakers are Nike\'s.
P.S. The First picture is my picture, that sneakers are Nike\'s.
>> Correct!
The Second picture is BTS FILA advertisement!
>> Correct!
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