file festival
학생이 쓴 원문
We have lots of national file awards. they are held in specific city like Busan, Seoul and the name of festival came from the city name. I\'ve never been there But I heard If I go there, I can see many famous movie stars. I don\'t think it is worth to go and see movie star than I just stay at home. I can see them in a TV with comfortable posture.Maybe It is because I don\'t have any favorite movie star to meet a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
Be careful of your capitalization.
Only the beginning of sentences and proper nouns are supposed to be in capital letters.
Work on this more closely.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
We have lots of national file awards.
>> We have lots of national film festivals.
they are held in specific city like Busan, Seoul and the name of festival came from the city name.
>> They are held in specific cities like Busan and Seoul so the name of the festival will be based on the city\'s name.
I\'ve never been there But I heard If I go there, I can see many famous movie stars.
>> I\'ve never been there but I heard that if I go there, I would see many famous movie stars.
I don\'t think it is worth to go and see movie star than I just stay at home.
>> I don\'t think it is worth it to go and see movie stars compared to staying at home.
I can see them in a TV with comfortable posture.
>> I can watch them on TV which is very comfortable.
Maybe It is because I don\'t have any favorite movie star to meet a lot.
>> Maybe, it is because I don\'t have any favorite movie star whom I want to meet.
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