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I want to add holidays every monday. Because many Koreans have much stress on moday. So I remove mondays and many Koreans don\'t have stress but may be they have stress on tuesday. Feat Teacher bye ㅠㅠ andㅠㅠis sad and cry.
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I want to add holidays every monday. Because many Koreans have much stress on moday.
>> I want to make Monday a holiday in Korea because a lot of Koreans feel so stressed every Monday.
So I remove mondays and many Koreans don\'t have stress but may be they have stress on tuesday.
>> So, once Monday is removed as a working day, Koreans will not get stressed about it and they will have less time to worry about things.
Feat Teacher bye ㅠㅠ andㅠㅠis sad and cry.
>> This is our last class Teacher, I feel so sad. See you next time!
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