final-term exam preperation

i got your homework but i have to prepare final-term exam. so i want to borrow your hands. I have a experience of voluntary service. That was teaching English and I have to be a mentor to children suffer from financial difficult or home problem. So I really have a sense of responsibility. And I was hopefull But when we met first they not open their mind. So I judged that I can’t open their mind then the education is useless. So we had time to be open-minded person. We talked together, and I can find that why they do that. They said that the college students are always ignore them and they just come here to get the school score. After our talk, I want to care their hurts. So I really hard to mentoring and educating. When their exam term I went to their house and greeted their parents politely and talk with their parents. And I help them to get a good score, and I play the basketball with them. Sometimes I bought dinner . Then I can be a good mentor these days and I get in touch with them until nowadays. Listen intently is the most important thing when we meet the problem And we can solve the problem by caful concern and listen intently. If I get a job , I will solve the problem by listening intently.

Hello there!  Thank you for writing a composition today. I have read the whole content and made some corrections for you to check though you did not really answered the question.^^ I believe that you could be a good mentor and facilitator. I wish you all the best. Don\'t worry because I will always be here for you and I am very much willing to help you. Continue the hardwork you are doing, and someday you will be successful.  :) See you again next meeting.:) T. Lorraine   i got your homework but i have to prepare final-term exam. >>I got my homework but I have to prepare for my final-term exam so i want to borrow your hands. >>Can I borrow your hands?(**nice expression^^)I have a experience of voluntary service. >>I have an experience of voluntary services.That was teaching English and I have to be a mentor to children suffer from financial difficult or home problem. >>That was teaching English and I have to be a mentor to children who suffer from financial difficulties and home problems. OR SIMPLY: That was teaching English to children who suffer from financial difficulties and home problems.So I really have a sense of responsibility.And I was hopefull>>Because of that I really need a sense of responsibility and I was hopeful in helping those children.  But when we met first they not open their mind. >>BETTER: At first,they were hesitant to open their minds.  So I judged that I can’t open their mind then the education is useless. >>So I thought I can\'t open their minds about the importance of education. So we had time to be open-minded person. >>Eventually,we had a time to be an open-minded individual. We talked together, and I can find that why they do that. >>We\'ve talked together and I found out their reasons of being such a close-minded people.They said that the college students are always ignore them and they just come here to get the school score. >>They said that the college students are always ignoring them and they only came here to get a score.After our talk, I want to care their hurts. >>After talking to them, I wanted to carry their pain. OR:After our conversation,I wanted to take good care of those emtionally hurt children.  So I really hard to mentoring and educating. >>So I really did my best in mentoring and educating them. OR:I tried so hard in teaching them.When their exam term I went to their house and greeted their parents politely and talk with their parents. >>During their examination I went in their houses,greeted their parents politely and talked to them. And I help them to get a good score, and I play the basketball with them. >>I helped them get a good score and played basketball with them.  Sometimes I bought dinner . >>Correct!^^Then I can be a good mentor these days and I get in touch with them until nowadays. >>Then I became a good mentor and I still get in touch with them.Listen intently is the most important thing when we meet the problemAnd we can solve the problem by caful concern and listen intently. >>Listening intently/attentively is the most important thing when we meet a problem then we can definitely solve it.If I get a job , I will solve the problem by listening intently. >>Correct!^^