Final test with short vacation

2018-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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There will be a final test the day after tommorrow.The first class is Korean class.I think the last day test will be really hard.There will be a science and chinese test.If I get a good score my parents and I and my teachers will be happy and I can meet my vacation good.I will do my best and get a good score.I can do it.Because I'm [이름] Bernadina.

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There will be a final test the day after tommorrow.

>> Correct >> tomorrow

The first class is Korean class.I think the last day test will be really hard.

>> The first class is Korean class. I think the last day of the test will be really hard.

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There will be a science and chinese test.If I get a good score my parents and I and my teachers will be happy and I can meet my vacation good.

>> There will be a Science and Chinese test. If I get a good score, my parents, my teachers and I will be happy and I can have my vacation good.

I will do my best and get a good score.I can do it.Because I\'m [이름] Bernadina.

>> I will do my best and get a good score. I can do it, because I\'m [이름] Bernadina.

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