Finally!

2012-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

1) If it rain, the children will not go for a walk. 2) If she doesn't read the novel, she will not pass the literature test./ or can't 3) If I don't argue with my father, he will lend me his motorbike. 4) If we take the bus, we will not arrive(not/to arrive) in time. 5) If Dick buy the book, his friends wii be angry with him. 6) If Tom doesn't tidy up his room, Victoria will not help him with the muffins. 7) If the boys don't play football, the girls will come to the football pitch. 8) If you eat too much junk food, you will not lose weight. 9) If I don't make breakfast tomorrow morning, my girlfriend will not love me anymore. 10) If they don't hurry, they will not catch the train. ---------------------------- ㅜㅜ Finally, I checked your feedback. untill yesterday, I'm was so tired so I can't take up even a clothes to wearing nightclothes. anyway, See you tomorrow~ bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Happy Monday! I\'m glad you\'ve finally made your homework! You did a good job! Anyway, here are the answers and some corrections for your homework. I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow! ~ T. Michelle 1) If it rain, the children will not go for a walk. >>> If it rains, the children will not go for a walk 2) If she doesn\'t read the novel, she will not pass the literature test. / or can\'t >>> Correct! 3) If I don\'t argue with my father, he will lend me his motorbike. >>> Correct! 4) If we take the bus, we will not arrive(not/to arrive) in time. >>> If we take the bus, we will not arrive in time.5) If Dick buy the book, his friends wii be angry with him. >>> If Dick does not buy the book, his friends will be angry with him.6) If Tom doesn\'t tidy up his room, Victoria will not help him with the muffins. >>> Correct!7) If the boys don\'t play football, the girls will come to the football pitch. >>> If the boys do not play football, the girls will not come to the football pitch.8) If you eat too much junk food, you will not lose weight. >>> Correct!9) If I don\'t make breakfast tomorrow morning, my girlfriend will not love me anymore. >>> Correct!10) If they don\'t hurry, they will not catch the train. >>> Correct!----------------------------ㅜㅜ Finally, I checked your feedback. >>> Correct!untill yesterday, I\'m was so tired so I can\'t take up even a clothes to wearing nightclothes. >>> I was so tired yesterday that I haven\'t even changed for nightclothes. anyway, See you tomorrow~ bye~ >>> Anyway, I\'ll see you tomorrow. Goodbye!

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