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Hello Debby :) How was your weekend? I'm not good. Because I missed to give back the key of the room, so I didn't get back my domirtory's deposit. This was 50,000 Won! :'( Anyway, I apologize that I didn't finish my homework on time again. Thank you for your kindness. Take care ^^ <Essay> If I'm a millionaire, though it's just for one day, I will buy all things that I want to have. A car, maybe BMW, and a game, and a house, etc. Although it is just a imagination, I feel excited. I wish I will be like that in the future.

Hi there [이름] ^^ I do hope that you can have these things that you wished for. I also wish to have the things you have described.^^ It\'s easy to think about it but in reality it needs a lot of money and hard work. hahahaha^^ You can acheive that as long as you work really hard for it. And you deserve that too.^^ Take care^^ ^^T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hello Debby :)>> CORRECT OR> Hi there Debby^^How was your weekend? >> CORRECT OR> What did you do on your weekend?I\'m not good. Because I missed to give back the key of the room, so I didn\'t get back my domirtory\'s deposit. >> I\'m not good because I missed to giving back the key of the room, so I didn\'t get my domitory\'s deposit back. This was 50,000 Won! :\'(>> CORRECT OR> It had cost me 50,000 won.Anyway, I apologize that I didn\'t finish my homework on time again.>> CORRECT OR> I\'m sorry that I did not do my essay on time.Thank you for your kindness. >> CORRECT OR> Thanks for being kind.Take care ^^ >> CORRECT OR> Be careful.<Essay>If I\'m a millionaire, though it\'s just for one day, I will buy all things that I want to have. >> CORRECT OR> If I\'m a millionare for a day, I will purchase all the things that I need. A car, maybe BMW, and a game, and a house, etc. >> CORRECT OR> I will get a car for myself, a game or aeven a house.  Although it is just a imagination, I feel excited. >> CORRECT OR> Even if it is not true I get a exciting feeling.  I wish I will be like that in the future. >> CORRECT OR> I hope that I get that in the future.