Finally Friday

2014-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Toast! It is finally Friday, Debby! If I can't take a break during a weekend, the truth that tomorrow is Friday make me happy. I wish you also do. As I said, the conversastion between us was really interesting. I haven't met a person in Africa countries before. Although his pronounciation made me challenging to understand. Have a full of happiness on the weekend. Take care :) Essay: As you know... I want that the umbrella experience is the event that didn't happen. I feel ashamed until now. You, also be careful. This can also happen to you. kkk

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]^^

 

One of my wish is that I will never enter a building with an open umbrella. hahahaha

If this happens I hope then that you would also experience forgetting about your keys in the

refrigerator. hahahaha

That is my embarrassing moment. kkk

 

You also make our topics interesting. Keep up the good work and check my corrections for you.

Have a happy weekend and tell me all about it on Monday.^^

 

Take care^^

 

T. Debby^^

 

Here are my corrections for you:

 

Toast! It is finally Friday, Debby!

>> CORRECT

OR> Cheers! It\'s Friday today Debby^^
If I can\'t take a break during a weekend, the truth that tomorrow is Friday make me happy.

>> If I can\'t take a break during a weekend, the truth that tomorrow is Friday makes me happy.

 I wish you also do.
>> CORRECT

OR> I hope that it is the same with you.
As I said, the conversation between us was really interesting.

>> CORRECT

OR> Like I always say, talking with you is interesting.

 I haven\'t met a person in Africa countries before.

>>  I haven\'t met a person from African countries before.

[ Country is your main noun so use the adjective form of Africa, you must use African and use the word \"from\" because your talking about the people that belong in a specific place.]

Although his pronunciation made me challenging to understand.

>> Although his pronunciation is challenging to understand.


Have a full of happiness on the weekend.

>> Have a weekend full of happiness.
Take care :)

Essay:

As you know... I want that the umbrella experience is the event that didn\'t happen.

>> As you know... I want that the umbrella experience to have not happened.

[use past tense because you are talking about a past experience]

 I feel ashamed until now.

>> CORRECT

OR> I still feel the shame until now.

You, also be careful.

>> CORRECT

OR> Take caution too.

This can also happen to you. kkk

>> CORRECT

OR> This is also possible for you. haha

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