Finally, I pass the quailfication exam.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. My brother went to college.
2. I understood English.
3. My friends always laughed at my jokes.
4. The weather in California was perfect.
5. Our cats slept all day.
6. Your dress looked very pretty.
7. My sister walked very quickly.
8. We made mistakes when we speak English.
9. I am from Italy.
10. My brother had two dogs
Teacher I pass the exam I took!!
wow
Im happy to tell you this
I will be get a certification of skill, "information processing".
That means my salary will be raised.
It isn't much money, but I think It gives me a additional meaning.
Achievement needs lots of dedication and time.
and finally I get my goal.
now on, I will set another goal and try to achieve it.
but It shouldn't be not too high to achieve.
I should set a goal in the way of step by step.
It will be very happy When I remember in this moment in the future. isn't it?
강사 첨삭
Hello there!~
I am so happy for you!~ You have achieved the goal that you had set!~
Thank you for sharing your experience to me, my dear student.
Anyhow, in your homework, you might have misunderstood the instructions.
The homework was asking you to write the verbs in simple present.
Kindly check it again for you to be sure.
See you in class!~
~~T. Nina~~
1. My brother went to college.
>> My brother goes to college.2. I understood English.
>> I understand English.3. My friends always laughed at my jokes.
>> My friends always laugh at my jokes.4. The weather in California was perfect.
>> The weather in California is perfect.
5. Our cats slept all day.
>> Our cats sleep all day.6. Your dress looked very pretty.
>> Your dress looks very pretty.7. My sister walked very quickly.
>> My sister walks very quickly.8. We made mistakes when we speak English.
>> We make mistakes when we speak English.9. I am from Italy.
>> Correct.10. My brother had two dogs>> My brother have two dogs.
Teacher I pass the exam I took!!
>> Teacher, I passed the exam that I took!wowIm happy to tell you this
>> Correct.
>> OR: Wow! I am happy to tell this to you.I will be get a certification of skill, \"information processing\".
>> I will be able to get a certification for \"information processing\".That means my salary will be raised.
>> Correct.
>> OR: It means that I\'m going to have a raise.
>> OR: It means that I\'m going to have a higher salary.It isn\'t much money, but I think It gives me a additional meaning.
>> It isn\'t much money, but I think it is an addition \"meaning\". [meaning-income]
>> OR: It isn\'t much money, but I think it is an additional income for me.Achievement needs lots of dedication and time.
>> Correct.and finally I get my goal.
>> Finally, I got my goal.
>> OR: Finally, I achieved my goal.now on, I will set another goal and try to achieve it.
>> Now, I will set another goal and try to achieve it.but It shouldn\'t be not too high to achieve.
>> But it shouldn\'t be too high/ difficult to achieve.I should set a goal in the way of step by step.
>> I should set a goal that I can meet step by step.It will be very happy When I remember in this moment in the future. isn\'t it? >> I will be very happy when I remember this moment in the future, won\'t I?
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