Finally, the last one is..

2011-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

The last one is the couple who I cheer best. The wife is 20 years old and her husband is 22. They have been married for three years. I didn't like them at first because they looked bad. When they got married, they were barely high school students. They have a daughter who is two. The husband was too violent and easily swore in front of his kid. The wife who didn't graduated from her high school lived by doing a part time job in order for her baby's powdered milk. They didn't have any expectation each other. neither did I. But they can show the biggiest change because there was nothing. The program tries to remind them of their lovely days. This program is still on air. They don't dance perfectly yet but I hope them to be happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! You almost got everything correct. Kk^-^v Just a little bit more. Since the program is still on air then I will be reading more about the next happenings, haha! Take care and talk to you on Wednesday on our new schedule! -Tiny^0^ The last one is the couple who I cheer best. >>correctThe wife is 20 years old and her husband is 22. >>correctThey have been married for three years. >>correctI didn't like them at first because they looked bad. >>correctWhen they got married, they were barely high school students. >>correctThey have a daughter who is two. >>correctThe husband was too violent and easily swore in front of his kid. >>correctThe wife who didn't graduated from her high school lived by doing a part time job in order for her baby's powdered milk. >> The wife who didn't graduate from her high school lived by doing a part time job for her baby's milk. >> The wife who didn't graduate from her high school lived by doing a part time job in order to earn for her baby's milk. They didn't have any expectation each other. neither did I. >> They didn't have any expectation from each other and neither did I. But they can show the biggiest change because there was nothing. >> But they can show the biggest change because there was nothing. >>spelling check: biggestThe program tries to remind them of their lovely days. >>correctThis program is still on air. >>correctThey don't dance perfectly yet but I hope them to be happy. >>correct^-^v

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