Financial issues 2

2011-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Luckily, I don't have any financial problems now coz I am single and live in a small studio which costs me low rent. When I have a child , I might have financial problems. Sometimes I hear about people who are suffering from financial problems. The people who live in seoul,capital of Korea should pay high rent. Some pay more than half of their salary for the rent. So they can't almost save money.

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Thank you so much for dropping in your composition my dear..^^ Job well done.. Talk to you later my dear.. T.Cam:)   Luckily, I don't have any financial problems now coz I am single and live in a small studio which costs me low rent. >>correct! When I have a child , I might have financial problems. >>If I'll be having a child, I might start having some financial problems. Sometimes I hear about people who are suffering from financial problems. >>Sometimes I hear peeople suffer from financial problems. The people who live in seoul,capital of Korea should pay high rent. >>correct! (but make it sure that proper names of cities should be capitalized) Some pay more than half of their salary for the rent. >>correct! So they can't almost save money. >>correct!

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