Financial issues.

I partly agree with that it is good for univ student to know how to invest their money. In modern society, knowing about investing money is important, no matter who are young or old. Many people trade stocks for making money. But Univ student should concentrate on studying rather than earning money. If they study more , they might get an well paid job.

Hello there my dear [이름], Job well done on your composition.. Keep up the good work.. Talk to you later my dear..:) Teacher Cam   I partly agree with that it is good for univ student to know how to invest their money. >>I partly agree that its good for university students to know how to invest their money. In modern society, knowing about investing money is important, >>Correct >>In this modern society, investing money is important. no matter who are young or old. >>No matter who you are; young or old. Many people trade stocks for making money. >>correct! But Univ student should concentrate on studying rather than earning money. >>But university students should also concentrate on their studies than earning money.  If they study more , they might get an well paid job. >>If they study more, they might as well get a well paid job.