Fine Dust
학생이 쓴 원문
These days they are a lot of fine dust in Korea.And I have to wear mask if I go anywhere.It feels really horrible.Spring starts with fine Dust.I can't go outside much.Horrible!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you For doing your assignment Today.
Good Job Buddy
and Take care wear a mask every time you go out of the house
for you not to inhale the fine dust.
Teacher Brian
These days they are a lot of fine dust in Korea.
>>These days there\'s a lot of fine dust in Korea
And I have to wear mask if I go anywhere.
>>and I have to wear mask if I go somewhere,
It feels really horrible.
>>It feels really horrible
Spring starts with fine Dust.
>>because Spring starts with fine Dust
I can\'t go outside much Horrible!
>>and I can\'t go outside often.
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