Finishing the South Africa World cup 2010 (2)
학생이 쓴 원문
International Olympic Committee (IOC) already unanimously decided to forbid the use of Vuvuzela from next Olympic taking place in Italy in 2012.
This world cup often called one of the worst world cups because of bad calls which happended almost every games. Especially, English player Gerrad’s goal to German at the second round of 16s is called the worst bad call in South Africa world cup. At 15min second half Gerrad’s shooting stoke the uppost and the ball made great sweep to the bottom of the inner post and bound out to the outside of the goal line. The referee decided that was not a goal because of not crossing the goal line. As video replayed, it clearly indicated goal crossed line. Unfortunate for English, They were not able to get the game draw.
강사 첨삭
International Olympic Committee (IOC) already unanimously decided to forbid the use of Vuvuzela from next Olympic taking place in Italy in 2012. >>The International Olympic Committee (IOC) already unanimously decided to forbid the use of Vuvuzela for the next Olympics taking place in Italy in 2012.
This world cup often called one of the worst world cups because of bad calls which happended almost every games. Especially, English player Gerrad’s goal to German at the second round of 16s is called the worst bad call in South Africa world cup.
>>This world cup is often called one of the worst World Cups because of th bad calls which happened in almost every game. Especially the English player Gerrad’s goal against Germany at the second round of 16s is called the worst call in the South African World Cup.
At 15min second half Gerrad’s shooting stoke the uppost and the ball made great sweep to the bottom of the inner post and bound out to the outside of the goal line. The referee decided that was not a goal because of not crossing the goal line.
>>At 15 minutes of the second half Gerrad’s shooting stoke the uppost and the ball made a great sweep to the bottom of the inner post and bound out to the outside of the goal line. The referee decided that it was not a goal because it did not cross the goal line.
As video replayed, it clearly indicated goal crossed line. Unfortunate for English, They were not able to get the game draw.
>>As they replayed the video, it clearly indicated the goal crossed the line. Unfortunately for the English, They were not able to get the game draw.
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