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Hi. Dominic. This is [Name]. I arrived home earlier than the other day. I have not any work to fix my desktop, but now it is working well. I don't know its reason of failure. Sometimes, you may think me strange. I will see two place, because I have two monitor. My desktop does not include webcam. So I use my notebook which is included webcam. But its monitor is small. If you don't want to see me, I will only use my desktop. Also sometimes, you can not see me. Then, Just think I am talking with you by my cell phone in outdoor. see you soon..

Hi Shin! Thank you for sending me your composition. It뭩 good to know that you are trying your best to talk and express yourself in English. Take care and see you later! :D

- Dominic 

Hi. Dominic.

-Hi Dominic,

This is [Name].

>>CORRECT/

>>It뭩 Shin.

I arrived home earlier than the other day.

>>I arrived home earlier today than yesterday.

I have not any work to fix my desktop, but now it is working well.

>>I have not fixed my desktop yet, but it is still working well.

I don't know its reason of failure.

>>I don뭪 know its reason for failure.

Sometimes, you may think me strange.

>>You might sometimes think that I뭢 strange.

I will see two place, because I have two monitor.

>>I can see two images, because I have two monitors.

My desktop does not include webcam.

>>My desktop doesn뭪 have a webcam.

So I use my notebook which is included webcam.

>>So I use my notebook because it has a webcam.

But its monitor is small.

>>CORRECT/or

>>But it has a small monitor.

If you don't want to see me, I will only use my desktop.

>>If you don뭪 want to see me, I can use my desktop.

Also sometimes, you can not see me.

>>There are also times, that you won뭪 see me.

Then, Just think I am talking with you by my cell phone in outdoor.

>>I might be using my cellphone because I am outdoors.

see you soon..

>>I뭠l see you soon.