first anniversary party.1
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning.~ lei.~
i was quite busy this morning. wow.
and i could take some breathe now.
yesterday. i went to the party. and i enjoyed the party. with my friend. the baby wore Han-bok. she was pretty cute. ^ ^
at the main event, she's first selection was very exciting. she's mom wants her to pick up the pencil. and she's daddy wants her to pick up the money. Can you guess what was the she's choice?
she picked up the pencil! we blessed her.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
It’s nice to know that you enjoyed the party last night. And not only that, you finally settled things out with your ex-boyfriend. I am happy for you. At least you are feeling a bit easy now. Take it easy okay. And don’t overwork yourself. See you later [이름].
Lei J
Good morning.~ lei.~
>>correcti was quite busy this morning. wow.
>>correctand i could take some breathe now.
>>I need to take some breakyesterday. i went to the party. and i enjoyed the party. with my friend. the baby wore Han-bok.
>>yesterday, I went to my friend’s baby party, her baby wore Han-bok
she was pretty cute. ^ ^
>>correctat the main event, she's first selection was very exciting.
>>as for the main event, her first selection was very exciting
she's mom wants her to pick up the pencil.
>>her mom wants her to pick up the pencil.
and she's daddy wants her to pick up the money.
>>and her dad wants her to pick up the money.
Can you guess what was the she's choice?
>>Can you guess what the baby chose?she picked up the pencil! we blessed her.
>>correct
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