first anniversary party.2

2010-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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and actually, there was another purpose to me. i thought when i attend the party, i could meet my first ex-boy friend who i broke up about 2 years ago. he has given me dissappints. so without any notice, i didn't answer his call and we finally broke up. i gave him scratch in his mind. as time passes i realized that he was good person to me. and i did wrong behavior. but i don't regret to broke up with him. but i thought i should apologize to him someday. but when i saw him at the party.

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and actually, there was another purpose to me. >>actually, I had another purpose why attended the party i thought when i attend the party, i could meet my first ex-boy friend who i broke up about 2 years ago. >>I thought that I could meet my ex-boyfriend whom I broke up with 2 years ago. he has given me dissappints. >>He has given me disappointments. so without any notice, i didn't answer his call and we finally broke up. >>So without any notice, I didn’t answer any of his calls until we finally broke up i gave him scratch in his mind. >>Maybe it caused him scar in his mind as time passes i realized that he was good person to me. >>as time passes, I realized that he had been but a good person to me and i did wrong behavior. >>What I did was wrong>>I handled it wrongly but i don't regret to broke up with him. >>But I don’t regret breaking up with him but i thought i should apologize to him someday. >>correct but when i saw him at the party. >>correct

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