first anniversary party.3

2010-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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i could say hello to him. and also i feel so complex. so i couldn't eat anything. my feeling for him was not a love but i couldn't come easy. when he depart from the party.he gave me a regard to my friend. when i heard it. i followed him and finally i apologized to him. he told me that's ok. because he could understand me. after conversation. i feel like lose my mind burden.

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could say hello to him. >>I couldn’t even say hello to him and also i feel so complex. >>and I feel complicated so i couldn't eat anything. >>correct my feeling for him was not a love but i couldn't come easy. >>I know I don’t feel any love for him anymore but I couldn’t approach him that easily when he depart from the party.he gave me a regard to my friend. >>when he said goodbye from the party, he sent his regards thru my friend when i heard it. >>when I heard about it i followed him and finally i apologized to him. >>correct he told me that's ok. >>correct because he could understand me. >>correct after conversation. >>after our conversation i feel like lose my mind burden. >>I felt like I lost some burden

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