first anniversary party.3
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i could say hello to him. and also i feel so complex. so i couldn't eat anything. my feeling for him was not a love but i couldn't come easy. when he depart from the party.he gave me a regard to my friend. when i heard it. i followed him and finally i apologized to him. he told me that's ok. because he could understand me. after conversation. i feel like lose my mind burden.
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could say hello to him.
>>I couldn’t even say hello to him
and also i feel so complex.
>>and I feel complicated
so i couldn't eat anything.
>>correct
my feeling for him was not a love but i couldn't come easy.
>>I know I don’t feel any love for him anymore but I couldn’t approach him that easily
when he depart from the party.he gave me a regard to my friend.
>>when he said goodbye from the party, he sent his regards thru my friend
when i heard it.
>>when I heard about it
i followed him and finally i apologized to him.
>>correct
he told me that's ok.
>>correct
because he could understand me.
>>correct
after conversation.
>>after our conversation
i feel like lose my mind burden.
>>I felt like I lost some burden
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