First assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Sophia. Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with you! We have a hard time expressing ourselves, especially if our interlocutors cannot see us. Using body language is also good for communication. ~T. Lyn
I had difficulty expressing myself while I had a job interview on the phone in English.
>>Correct. I was having an interview over the phone in English and I had a hard time expressing myself.
At that time, I had prepared the interview in Korean because I applied for the Korean company only.
>>Correct. At that time, I prepared for the interview in Korean since I only applied for a Korean company.
However, last month, I got a chance to take a job interview in Axxxxxx Korea where the HR team has worked in Singapore.
>>Correct. But last month, I had an opportunity to take a job interview at Axxxxxx Korea, where the HR team worked in Singapore.
I did not expect that the HR team directly called me in English.
>>I didn\'t know that the HR team would call in English directly.
It was the most embarrassed situation I had ever experienced in job interview.
>>It was the most embarrassing situation I\'ve ever experienced in a job interview.
The most embarrassing thing is that I cannot use my body language.
>>Correct. The most embarrassing thing is not being able to use body language.
If the interviewer saw my body languages, it would be more effective to convey the meaning.
>>If the interviewer had seen my body language, I would have been able to convey the meaning more effectively.
In this experience, I learned the importance of body language during conversations.
>>Correct. This experience taught me the importance of body language during conversations.
The suitable body motions can be an effective tool for communicating each other.
>>Proper body movement can be an effective tool for communicating with each other.
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