First class
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday, I took my first English class through phone.
I studied in Australia for several months but I have lost all the fluency that I had in Aus since I came back to Korea last year. so I was kind of nervous and worried but more and more I felt I got confidence even though my speaking skills were still terrible. I believe I will be better soon.
I introduced myself and likewise almost all people who heard about my major she responded that she was surprised. because my major is Russian literature which is not common really.
As this is my first time and I don't have enough information about TOEIC SPEAKING, she explained it kindly. when my teacher spoke, suddenly the announcer of my apartment had broadcasting about regular checking of pipeline. It was too noisy to continue our conversation and I was really embarrassed. but my teacher, Camile was just laughing aloud so I felt good. I think she is very outgoing and happy person. I'm so excited to have a lovely phone call everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear [이름],
Thank you so muc for taking some time to make your composition.
I wanna say thank you as well for having a very active class. To be honet with you my dear, I\'m always impressed with you because you are such a very smart student. I\'m thankful that I became your teacher..:)
I\'m looking forward to having great classes with you my dear..
Stay smart always..
Talk to you again tomorrow and have a good day..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Yesterday, I took my first English class through phone.
>>correctI studied in Australia for several months but I have lost all the fluency that I had in Aus since I came back to Korea last year.
>>correct
so I was kind of nervous and worried but more and more I felt I got confidence even though my speaking skills were still terrible.
>>correct
I believe I will be better soon.
>>correctI introduced myself and likewise almost all people who heard about my major she responded that she was surprised.
>>I introduced myself and likewise almost all people who heard my major,she was surprised.
because my major is Russian literature which is not common really. >>Because my major is Russian literature is not really common.
As this is my first time and I don\'t have enough information about TOEIC SPEAKING, she explained it kindly.
>>correct
when my teacher spoke, suddenly the announcer of my apartment had broadcasting about regular checking of pipeline.
>>correct
It was too noisy to continue our conversation and I was really embarrassed.
>>correct
but my teacher, Camile was just laughing aloud so I felt good.
>>correct
I think she is very outgoing and happy person.
>>correct
I\'m so excited to have a lovely phone call everyday.
>>correct
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