First Class

2014-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

It's been a long time that i speak in english with forigen people. So i was afraid if I make some mistakes during the conversation. but nothing didn't happend. it was quite fun and I felt 10 minutes is to short to improve my english skill. And I'm considering about increasing class time. Also my teacher looked little tired. I'm not sure but I just felt like that. I hope her to help me to being a good english speaker with many corrections.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!   Thank you so much for sending me this compisition. I really appreciate it! I\'m glad that you had fun during our conversation. And I apologize if you felt that I was a little bit tired. It\'s maybe because of my voice. I\'m having colds now and I hope you\'d understand. Anyway, I hope that you\'ll keep writing and sending me compositions. It is one way to improve your writing skills. Goodbye for now my dear! See you in class tomorrow.   ~Teacher Shanee^^_   It\'s been a long time that i speak in english with forigen people. >>It\'s been a long time since I spoke in English with foreign people. >>Or: It\'s been a long time since I talked to foreigners in English. So i was afraid if I make some mistakes during the conversation. >>So I was afraid that I might make some mistakes during the conversation.but nothing didn\'t happend. >>But nothing wrong did happen. it was quite fun and I felt 10 minutes is to short to improve my english skill. >>It was quite fun and I felt that 10 minutes is too short to improve my English skill. And I\'m considering about increasing class time. >>And I\'m considering whether I should increase the class time. >>Or: And I\'m considering incresing the class time. Also my teacher looked little tired. >>Also my teacher looked a little tired. >>Or: My teacher sounded a little tired. I\'m not sure but I just felt like that. >>Correct!I hope her to help me to being a good english speaker with many corrections. >>By giving corrections, I hope she\'ll help me become a good English speaker. >>OR: I hope her to give me many corrections so I\'d become a good English speaker. (I hope I got the correct message you\'re trying to convey.)

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