First Class
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It's been a long time that i speak in english with forigen people.
So i was afraid if I make some mistakes during the conversation.
but nothing didn't happend. it was quite fun and I felt 10 minutes is to short to improve my english skill. And I'm considering about increasing class time.
Also my teacher looked little tired. I'm not sure but I just felt like that.
I hope her to help me to being a good english speaker with many corrections.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending me this compisition.
I really appreciate it! I\'m glad that you had fun during our conversation.
And I apologize if you felt that I was a little bit tired.
It\'s maybe because of my voice. I\'m having colds now and I hope you\'d understand.
Anyway, I hope that you\'ll keep writing and sending me compositions. It is one way to improve
your writing skills. Goodbye for now my dear! See you in class tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^_
It\'s been a long time that i speak in english with forigen people.
>>It\'s been a long time since I spoke in English with foreign people.
>>Or: It\'s been a long time since I talked to foreigners in English. So i was afraid if I make some mistakes during the conversation.
>>So I was afraid that I might make some mistakes during the conversation.but nothing didn\'t happend.
>>But nothing wrong did happen.
it was quite fun and I felt 10 minutes is to short to improve my english skill.
>>It was quite fun and I felt that 10 minutes is too short to improve my English skill.
And I\'m considering about increasing class time.
>>And I\'m considering whether I should increase the class time.
>>Or: And I\'m considering incresing the class time.
Also my teacher looked little tired.
>>Also my teacher looked a little tired.
>>Or: My teacher sounded a little tired.
I\'m not sure but I just felt like that.
>>Correct!I hope her to help me to being a good english speaker with many corrections.
>>By giving corrections, I hope she\'ll help me become a good English speaker.
>>OR: I hope her to give me many corrections so I\'d become a good English speaker. (I hope I got the correct message you\'re trying to convey.)
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