First class on Baseball Afterschool.
학생이 쓴 원문
Today was the first class on Baseball Afterschool. I had a clas on first semester. And today was the first time of second semester. On first semester there was a Seoul League. And we improved our skill. This semester we will practice hard and have a practicing game so that we can go to Busan next year. It will be fun.
강사 첨삭
Today was the first class on Baseball Afterschool.
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I had a clas on first semester. And today was the first time of second semester.
>> I had a class on the first semester and today was the first time of the second semester.
On first semester there was a Seoul League. And we improved our skill.
>> On the first semester, there was Seoul League and we improved our skills.
This semester we will practice hard and have a practicing game so that we can go to Busan next year.
>> This semester we will practice hard and have a practice game so that we can go to Busan next year.
It will be fun.
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