First day

I went to Seoul with my sisters. I will tell you about first day. We start from Daegu to Seoul at 10 o'clock on saturday. We arrived in Seoul at 2 o'clock. After I have luach I went to first place. First place is art gallery. In Seoul, there many art gallery but Daegu is not. We visited the exhibition of Keith Haring. I known information of exhibition reading magazine. It was worth to visit. Next we went to Gyeongbok Palace, Gwanghwamun square, Cheonggyecheon stream, Samcheong-dong and Ssamji gil. These are close to each other. So we toured by walking. It was taking an hour while we see the 5 sights. I was dead tired but went to the next palce Hong-Dae Street. We look around Hong-Dae Street for a moment and we stayed over at jjimjilbang (Korean sauna).

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Hi Lindsay! Thank you for telling me about your trip to Seoul. It must뭭e been so fun. I think you were a bit exhausted from that. You made good sentences here, however, try to be consistent with the verb tenses okay? You talked about past actions and activities so always use the past tense of the verb. Be careful with typos and wrong spelling as well.

Take care and enjoy your day! CIAO!

=T.Marie= 

First day

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I went to Seoul with my sisters.

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I will tell you about first day.

>> I will tell you about my first day in there.
We start from Daegu to Seoul at 10 o'clock on saturday.

>> We left Daegu for Seoul at 10 o뭖lock last Saturday.
We arrived in Seoul at 2 o'clock.

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After I have luach I went to first place.

>> After having lunch, I went to the first place.
First place is art gallery.

>> That first place was the art gallery.
In Seoul, there many art gallery but Daegu is not.

>> There are many art galleries in Seoul but there are non in Daegu.
We visited the exhibition of Keith Haring.

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I known information of exhibition reading magazine.

>> I knew some information about the exhibition through a magazine.
It was worth to visit.

>> It was worthy to visit.
Next we went to Gyeongbok Palace, Gwanghwamun square, Cheonggyecheon stream, Samcheong-dong and Ssamji gil.

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These are close to each other.

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So we toured by walking.

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It was taking an hour while we see the 5 sights.

>> It took us an hour to see those 5 tourist sights.
I was dead tired but went to the next palce Hong-Dae Street.

>> I was dead tired but I went to the next place which was Hongdae Street.
We look around Hong-Dae Street for a moment and we stayed over at jjimjilbang (Korean sauna).

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