first day

2017-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Today was first day with Dianne. She was very kind and made me feel comfortable. I think she is to be my good teacher and help to improve my conversation skills. I started to study English for traveling and talking about many kinds of topic with foreigners. When I tarveled Canada last summer I could not understand their language. Because their speaking was very fast. And I was to lose confidence speaking in English. I hope I will speak English fluently next year. And I want to read and listen at any tour places without Korean audio.

강사 첨삭

Hi, my dear [이름]!


Thank you for writing a composition. ^^

It\'s a pleasure for me to have you as my student.

You were nice and polite to speak with.

I am looking forward to speaking to you more, having fun, and learning English at the same time.

I\'ll see you later!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Today was first day with Dianne.

>> Today was the first day of class with Dianne.
 She was very kind and made me feel comfortable.

>> correct ^__^
 I think she is to be my good teacher and help to improve my conversation skills.

>>  I think she is going to be a good teacher and help me improve my conversation skills.
 I started to study English for traveling and talking about many kinds of topic with foreigners.

>> correct

>>  or: I started learning English for traveling and talking about various topics with foreigners.
 When I tarveled Canada last summer I could not understand their language. Because their speaking was very fast. And I was to lose confidence speaking in English.

>>  When I traveled to Canada last summer, I could not understand their language because their speaking was very fast and I was to lose confidence speaking in English.

>> or: When I went to Canada last summer, I couldn\'t understand their language because the people spoke very fast and I was to lose my confidence in speaking English.
 I hope I will speak English fluently next year.

>> correct
 And I want to read and listen at any tour places without Korean audio.

>>  I also want to read and listen to any tour places without Korean audio.

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