First day
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for answering your essay questions. Don\'t worry, I\'ll do my best to help you improve in your English communication skills.
NOTE: Let\'s refrain from adding \"er\" after the word \"more\".
Example: Harder
Aja aja!
~Teacher Eve.
I think i have wasted a lots of time.
>> I think I wasted a lot of time.
If i studied English more earlier, i would get English skill more better.
>> If I studied English earlier, I would be better in English.
>> OR: If I studied English earlier, I would be better.
I have a goal about my English quality.
>> I have a goal with the quality of my English.
I want to watch dramas or movie which are using English, by not using the subtitles.
>> I want to watch dramas or movies which are using English, by not using the subtitles.
>> OR: I want to watch English dramas or movies without subtitles.
I expect to improve my English speaking and listening skills with our class.
>> Correct!
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