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2020-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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I think i have wasted a lots of time. If i studied English more earlier, i would get English skill more better. I have a goal about my English quality. I want to watch dramas or movie which are using English, by not using the subtitles. I expect to improve my English speaking and listening skills with our class.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for answering your essay questions. Don\'t worry, I\'ll do my best to help you improve in your English communication skills.   

NOTE: Let\'s refrain from adding \"er\" after the word \"more\".

Example: Harder

Aja aja!

~Teacher Eve.

I think i have wasted a lots of time.

>> I think I wasted a lot of time.

If i studied English more earlier, i would get English skill more better.

>> If I studied English earlier, I would be better in English.

>> OR: If I studied English earlier, I would be better.

I have a goal about my English quality.

>> I have a goal with the quality of my English.

I want to watch dramas or movie which are using English, by not using the subtitles.

>> I want to watch dramas or movies which are using English, by not using the subtitles.

>> OR: I want to watch English dramas or movies without subtitles.

I expect to improve my English speaking and listening skills with our class.

>> Correct!

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