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To equip good sociability, it is important to categorize people. First, there is a person who is subject to resentment. To teat him, we'd better consider their mood for the time. Always check their current status. Second, there is a person who is willing to do any behavior which is ignominy. S/he is probably doing somthing crazy such as shouting in a public place and complaining about tiny things all the time. Third, we can meet a presumptuous person and we should treat him like that we make him face with his reality that he is nothing but a nomal human. Forth, there is a person who is full of conceit. S/he is always bragging about everything like "My flat is twice this size." or "I'm losing some weight, even though I don't excersie at all." If we categorize people into some types and if we prepare for each type of person, we will have a good sociablility in our lives.

  Hi there [이름]! Thank you for spending some of your time answering your homework. I  really appreciate it. ^^, I hope that you will continue to write something in your composition board. By the way, I made some modifications in your letter. Please read and study the following: To equip good sociability, it is important to categorize people. >> In order to know how to mingle with others, it is important to categorize them according to their sociability status. (Word choice, Sentence Construction) First, there is a person who is subject to resentment. >> First, there are people who are subject to resentment. (Sentence Construction) To teat him, we\'d better consider their mood for the time. Always check their current status. >> We\'d better consider their mood for a certain time period and always assess it. (Sentence Construction) Second, there is a person who is willing to do any behavior which is ignominy. >> Second, there are persons who are ignominious. (Sentence Construction) S/he is probably doing somthing crazy such as shouting in a public place and complaining about tiny things all the time. >> They probably do some crazy things such as shouting in a public place or complaining about menial things all the time. (Word choice, Sentence Construction) Third, we can meet a presumptuous person and we should treat him like that we make him face with his reality that he is nothing but a nomal human. >> Third, we can meet presumptuous people. We should help them face reality and tell them that they should act the real person that they are. (Sentence Construction)  Forth, there is a person who is full of conceit. >> Forth, there are those people who are full of conceit. (Sentence Construction) S/he is always bragging about everything like \"My flat is twice this size.\" or \"I\'m losing some weight, even though I don\'t excersie at all.\" >> They always brag about themselves and say something like, \"My flat is twice this size\", or \"I\'m losing some weight, even though I don\'t excersie at all.\" (Sentence Construction) If we categorize people into some types and if we prepare for each type of person, we will have a good sociablility in our lives. >> If we know how to categorize people according to their sociability status, it will be easy for us to know the right strategies on how to mingle with them. (Sentence Construction)  Have a great weekend! Merry Christmas! :)