first epi.

2014-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. Quite a few students have trouble with economics 2. It requires quite a little reading. 3. Few advisors spend as much time with their students. 4. He has little hope of passing his exams. 5. George's advisor spends little of time with him. I had a friend. We had been friends since high school days. I knew that she tended not to spend money for her friends or someone. In my case, of course, not now, but when I was in high school or university, in other words, I was not earning money, I was very generous to others. When I had some money to pay for something, I paid it without any expectation. One day, I realized that only I did like that when I was with her. She just got my favor and she had never paid it back. After I began to earn money, I changed my habit naturally and I became less generous than before to others. When I had lunch or coffee with her, I just gave her my dish’s and then told her to pay ours. Because I hated that I waited for getting back her dish’s when she hesitated to pay hers in front of me or cash counter. Anyway, I knew her character and It was not good but I could handle in this way.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thank you for your composition! It\'s good to know that you can handle that situation well. If I were you, I guess I would feel very awkward with that kind of situation. Luckily, I don\'t have that kind of trouble with any of my friends. I think I\'m blessed to have generous friends, but I don\'t let them pay for me. Of course sometimes they do if there\'s a special reason for them to do so. Sometimes, I pay for them, too. However, most of the time we go Dutch, so we don\'t really have that kind of awkward situation.

T. JanE ^^

1. Quite a few students have trouble with economics

>> Correct

2. It requires quite a little reading.

>> Correct

3. Few advisors spend as much time with their students.

>> Correct

4. He has little hope of passing his exams.

>> Correct

5. George\'s advisor spends little of time with him.
>> George\'s advisor spends quite a little or quite a bit of time with him. 
I had a friend.

>> Correct

We had been friends since high school days.

>> Correct

I knew that she tended not to spend money for her friends or someone.

>> Correct

In my case, of course, not now, but when I was in high school or university, in other words, I was not earning money, I was very generous to others.

>> Correct

or >> In my case, when I was in high school or university, I was very generous to others although I wasn\'t earning money yet.  

When I had some money to pay for something, I paid it without any expectation.

>> Correct

One day, I realized that only I did like that when I was with her.

>> Correct

She just got my favor and she had never paid it back.

>> Correct

After I began to earn money, I changed my habit naturally and I became less generous than before to others.

>> Correct

When I had lunch or coffee with her, I just gave her my dish’s and then told her to pay ours.

>> Correct

Because I hated that I waited for getting back her dish’s when she hesitated to pay hers in front of me or cash counter.

>> I hated that I waited for her to pay her dish when she hesitated to pay hers in front of me or the cash counter. 

Anyway, I knew her character and It was not good but I could handle in this way.

>> Anyway, I knew her character and it was not good, but I could handle it in this way. 

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