First full- Mooonday
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!!!
I appreciate your time in writing about your daughter and I am very proud of you because you are doing a great job in taking care of your family.
I hope you\'ll continue that level of positivity for our succeeding classes. c\",)
May you have a stress-free day ahead.
Take care
T. Jeny
Hi, teacher
>>correct
Today is First full- Moonday.
>>Today is first full Moon-day.
I left home early.
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We ate special foods for breakfast such as chestnut, wahat, fine grain rice five kinds of boiled vegetables, wine and roast fish.
>> We ate special food for breakfast such as chestnut, wheat, fine grain rice, five kinds of boiled vegetables, wine and roast fish.
Many events in Korea take place today.
>>There are many events in Korea that will take place today.
in cluding jisinbargi, Kite flying, jwibulnori and samulnirs.
>>Which are jisinbargi, kite flying, jwibulnori and samulnirs.
At night, We will make a wish upon the full moon to ward of evil fortune.
>>At night, we will make a wish upon the full moon against evil fortune.
If we wish upon the full moon your dream comes true.
>>If we wish upon the full moon our dreams will come true.
The lunar New year`s day celebration mormally of the first month on the lunar calender.
>>The Lunar New year`s day celebration normally starts in the first month on the lunar calendar.
It`s the first full moon festival of the year.Anyway, my daughter new expericene for her.
>>It`s the first full moon festival of the year and my daughter will have a new experience.
She started her new life now.
>>She just started her new life now.
Everything was sent with a courier.
>>Everything was sent to the courier.
But I have to send the rest of things.
>>But I still have to send the rest of her things.
I still think my daughter id think young.
>>I still think my daughter\'s way of thinking is still young.
It`s hard to adapt because there`s so much social experience.
>> It`s hard to adapt because there are many social experiences.
She has to adapt well in the future.
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Application for course registration and start the new semester.
>>She needs to apply for her course and start the new semester.
She will be busy.
>>correct
Iam glad her can enter the dormitory.
>>I am glad she was able to enter at the dormitory.
Have you good weekend.^^
>>May you have a good weekend.
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