first homework

.I was like corrected immediately in last class. .Yesterday, i rode a bike very far place with my husband and 2 couple. . we started 10 AM and we arrived at destination at noon. .there are very beutiful and leisure island. after rode a bike 4 hours we went back home. yesterday was very fantastic.

Hi Miss. [Name]! ^^ Thank you for writing a composition! I really appreciate it. Wow! You rode a bike with your husband? That sounds sweet! ^^ I envy you Miss. [Name]! I hope I'll find my husband soon! ^^ Anyways, for our first day of lesson, you did a good job and you were open to corrections. See you again tomorrow! Have a goodnight! T. Dianne ^^ .I was like corrected immediately in last class.>>I was corrected immediately in the last class..Yesterday, i rode a bike very far place with my husband and 2 couple.>>Yesterday, I rode a bike and we went to a very far place with 2 couple.. we started 10 AM and we arrived at destination at noon. >>We started from 10 am and we arrived in the destination at noon..there are very beutiful and leisure island. >>There are very beautiful and leisure island.after rode a bike 4 hours we went back home.>>After we rode a bike for 4 hours we went back home. >>After riding a bike for 4 hours we went back home.yesterday was very fantastic. >>CORRECT [just capitalize the first word if you start a sentence. 'Yesterday'] Or >>Yesterday was very fantastic! [exclamation mark]