First homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]
Thanks for doing your homework.
Oh yes! I would love to give you more challenging homework.
You did a magnificent job! You got a perfect score.
I also binge when I am stressed. hahaha!
I love eating desserts and ice cream.
How about you? Tell me about it in class.
Of course, it\'s my pleasure to help you.
Let us work together and don\'t hesitate to ask questions.
Talk to you soon. ^^
Teacher Nina
Nina, I\'m glad to study with you.
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I always think that every meeting has a special meaning:)
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Especially, I want to correct my pronunciation, intonation, and sentence structure.
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>> OR: I really want to enhance my pronunciation, intonation and grammar skills.
When I hear my recorded files, I definitely notice that my voice is too boring because I have very small range of intonation(such as up and down).
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>> OR: When I heard the recordings, I noticed that my intonation needs more polishing.
I don\'t know where I emphasize and use accents in the words or sentences.
>> I don\'t know where will I emphasize and use accents in the words or sentences.
So, I eagerly want to improve in these parts with you!
>> So I am eager to improve these parts with you.
>> OR: I am really eager to improve these things with you.
Please help me. I\'ll make my efforts!
>> Please help me. I\'ll make a lot of effort.
>> OR: Please help me. I\'ll do my best.
Anyway, One of my problems is that I can\'t controll eating foods.
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These days, I eat too much food at one time.
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>> OR: I eat a lot of food these days.
>> OR: Did you mean: I binge when I eat.
But the thing is after a few hours, I eat again!:( I have to be more moderate.
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>> OR: But the thing is after a few hours, I feel hungry again and I think I need to eat moderately.
HOMEWORK:
1) He is dreaming.
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2)It is green.
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3) They are on the wall.
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4) It is running.
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5) We are watching TV.
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6) They are in the garden.
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7)He is riding his bike.
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8) She is from Bristol.
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9) She has got a brother.
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10)I think the question is strange.;;
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>> OR: Have you got a computer, Mandy?
Please give me more difficult homework next time~Thank you!
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>> OR: Please give me more challenging homework next time. Thank you.
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