First impression
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Marketing and service areas are likely to prefer those who have good first impressions. Because of the nature of the jobs, there are more opportunities to treat customers or consumers in person than other jobs. Kinder and better impressions help someone to purchase something.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to answer my question. I agree; having a pleasing personality and making a good impression is crucial for a salesperson in their job!
- T. Caitlyn!
Marketing and service areas are likely to prefer those who have good first impressions.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: In marketing and service areas, those who make good first impressions are often preferred.
Because of the nature of the jobs, there are more opportunities to treat customers or consumers in person than other jobs.
>> Due to the nature of the jobs, there are more opportunities to interact with customers or consumers in person than in other professions.
Kinder and better impressions help someone to purchase something.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Kind and favorable impressions often influence someone to make a purchase.
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