first impression

2015-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I have to admit that I have been a person who judged a person’s character based on my first impression. I still tend to trust my first impressions, although I try not to. I did actually experience that my first impression proved to be wrong. When I interviewed new employees, some gave me a good first impression in the first interview, but it changed later in the opposite way. There were the other cases as well: the first impression was not good, but later turned to be positive as the second or third interview was going on. Although there is a saying that if you are over 40 years old, you have to be responsible for your look because you face can show how you lived your life, there are some exceptions. So you shouldn’t rely too much on your first impression.It is so sad that people undergo a plastic surgery to look better these days due to the trend that our society puts much emphasis on people’s appearance. People less care about building inner beauty and it affects young generation.

강사 첨삭

Great day to you Sir [이름]!

How are you today?

I heard that the weather in some areas in Korea is rainy.

I hope you don\'t feel under the weather today.

Cheer up! We only have one day left before the weekend.

You are right! We shouldn\'t always rely on our first impression.

We should always look into the inner beauty of the person.

There are also people who looks good but has a bad attitude.

I am so thankful for your effort in writing an essay.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina


I have to admit that I have been a person who judged a person’s character based on my first impression.

>> correct

I still tend to trust my first impressions, although I try not to.

>> correct

I did actually experience that my first impression proved to be wrong.

>> correct

When I interviewed new employees, some gave me a good first impression in the first interview, but it changed later in the opposite way.

>> correct

There were the other cases as well: the first impression was not good, but later turned to be positive as the second or third interview was going on.

>> correct

Although there is a saying that if you are over 40 years old, you have to be responsible for your look because you face can show how you lived your life, there are some exceptions.

>> Did you mean: Although there is a saying that if you are over 40 years old, you have to be responsible on the way you look because your face can show how you lived your life but there are some exceptions.

So you shouldn’t rely too much on your first impression.

>> correct

It is so sad that people undergo a plastic surgery to look better these days due to the trend that our society puts much emphasis on people’s appearance.

>> correct 

People less care about building inner beauty and it affects young generation.

>> correct

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