First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to secur
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I do agree that first impressions are important but it is not the only one which is able to evaluate people\'s abilities. There are a lot of books which state how to improve person\'s impression. Many people would like to learn it and try to change their first impression by doing what books or professionals say. However, there’s more to something than meets the eye. I have met a lot of people who have bad first impression but they have really gentle personality. So, if we focus on physical appearance to judge someone\'s impression too much we might lose a chance to hire a nice person or to be a good friend. I don\'t know what is the best way to select talented employees.
However, job interview has a serious problem. Because administrators only have one chance to see candidates and need to select them.
So, first impression is the only one way to choose proper employees. In summary, I do agree partially about the topic. I think first impression is important but other things also im
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Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for taking the time in doing your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^^
Nice thoughts you have here. I agree with you. If you are doing an interview, it is important to dress properly and speak accordingly. I guess that makes a good impression! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
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There are a lot of books which state how to improve person\'s impression.
>>There are a lot of books that state how to make a good impression.
Many people would like to learn it and try to change their first impression by doing what books or professionals say.
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However, there’s more to something than meets the eye.
>>However, there\'s more than meets the eye.
I have met a lot of people who have bad first impression but they have really gentle personality.
>>I have met a lot of people who have made bad first impressions but they have really gentle personality.
So, if we focus on physical appearance to judge someone\'s impression too much we might lose a chance to hire a nice person or to be a good friend.
>>So, if we focus on a person\'s physical appearance too much and make an impression, we might loose the chance of hiring a nice employee or having a good friend.
I don\'t know what is the best way to select talented employees.
>>CORRECT
However, job interview has a serious problem.
However, job interview has a serious problem.
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Because administrators only have one chance to see candidates and need to select them.
>>CORRECT
So, first impression is the only one way to choose proper employees.
So, first impression is the only one way to choose proper employees.
>>So, first impression is the only way to choose proper employees.
In summary, I do agree partially about the topic.
>>CORRECT
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