First meet with teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Today was first meet with Dianne teacher.I signed up PowerEnglish class when I was 4thgrade.I learned with teacher Liza and teacher Kris.I have been learning when I was 7 years old.My mom liked your lesson.My mom likes teacher who make a sentence and lead have a class well and teach the correct pronounciation when I have a error in my speaking.I'm [이름] and I like baseball very much.I like pizza and I like P.E. most at subject.And I like studying history.My favorite contury is Canada and I really hate Japan.And my first dream is be a movie director.Second dream is Be a rich and build a baseball stadium for kids.Third dream is I want to build a movie theater at Africa and I want to provide some food to them for free.
I have a few question.
1.Where is your house?
2.How many family are you have?
3.How old are you?
4.What is your favorite food?
5.What is your hobby?
6.What subject do you good at?
Let's have a good class.
Teacher next Tuseday maybe I can't participate our class.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
It was nice meeting you! ^^
I had fun in our class today.
You were very cooperative and you did well.
Thank you for this composition, I appreciate it.
Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne
Today was first meet with Dianne teacher.
>> It was the first meeting with teacher Dianne today.
I signed up PowerEnglish class when I was 4thgrade.
>> I signed up a class in PowerEnglish when I was in fourth grade.
I learned with teacher Liza and teacher Kris.
>> Correct
>> Or: I learned from teacher Liza and teacher Kris.
I have been learning when I was 7 years old.
>> Correct
>> Or: I have been learning since I was 7 years old.
My mom liked your lesson.
>> Correct
>> Or: My mom liked your class.
My mom likes teacher who make a sentence and lead have a class well and teach the correct pronounciation when I have a error in my speaking.
>> My mom likes a teacher who makes sentence correction, teach the correct pronunciation of mispronounced words when I\'m speaking, and who can lead the class well.
I\'m [이름] and I like baseball very much.
>> Correct
I like pizza and I like P.E. most at subject.
>> I like pizza and I like PE the most.
And I like studying history.
>> Correct
My favorite contury is Canada and I really hate Japan.
>> My favorite country is Canada and my least favorite country is Japan.
And my first dream is be a movie director.
>> My first dream is to become a movie director.
Second dream is Be a rich and build a baseball stadium for kids.
>> My second dream is to be rich so I can build a baseball stadium for kids.
Third dream is I want to build a movie theater at Africa and I want to provide some food to them for free.
>> My third dream is to build a movie theater in Africa and I want to provide some food to the people there for free.I have a few question.
>> I have few questions.1.Where is your house?
>> Where do you live? (Maybe this is what you mean)
>> I live in the [이름]ippines.2.How many family are you have?
>> How many family members does your family have?
>> There are four members in my family and I have a younger sister.3.How old are you?
>> Correct
>> I am 31 years old.4.What is your favorite food?
>> Correct
>> My favorite food is spaghetti.5.What is your hobby?
>> Correct
>> My hobby is watching TV programs and movies.6.What subject do you good at?
>> What subject are you good at?
>> I think I\'m good at English. ^^Let\'s have a good class.
>> CorrectTeacher next Tuseday maybe I can\'t participate our class.
>> Maybe I can\'t attend the class on Tuesday teacher.
>> Or: Maybe I can\'t participate in the class on Tuesday teacher.
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