First of all, there are lots of seniors living alone. So, they suffer from the depression and the ca
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If the seniors are used to using that, they won\'t be afraid of visiting restaurants. But even the speed and accuracy make comfortable life, human should lead the society not robots. Against to salary increasing, most self-ownerships decide to utilize robots. But, if the role of human is replaced with the robots, it is harder to make a living. Finally, the risk of robots has been suggesting now on. There are some opinions that the robots have their own emotion and thinking. So, investing money to well fare is more realistic to solve the social problems rather than developing and depending on the scientific technology.
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Thanks for this as well Mary!
If the seniors are used to using that, they won\'t be afraid of visiting restaurants.
>>> correct
But even the speed and accuracy make comfortable life, human should lead the society not robots.
>>> But even if the speed and accuracy make a comfortable life, humans should lead the society not robots.
Against to salary increasing, most self-ownerships decide to utilize robots.
>>> OR: Contradictory to salary increasing, most self-ownerships decide to utilize robots.
But, if the role of human is replaced with the robots, it is harder to make a living.
>>> correct
Finally, the risk of robots has been suggesting now on.
>>> Finally, the risk of robots has been suggested these days.
There are some opinions that the robots have their own emotion and thinking.
>>> correct
So, investing money to well fare is more realistic to solve the social problems rather than developing and depending on the scientific technology.
>>> correct
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