First person is alwalys my boy friend.
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When I feeling low, I talk with boyfriend first.
But, he always give me a solution not to empathy.
I want to empathy but he is trying to judge the situation and give me a solution.
So sometimes he make me more feeling down.
I have a best friend. she always on my side.
she more upset than me and swear at the person who made me feeling down. Also, she did empathy.
I feel better after talking to her.
So, When I feeling down, call both of them to get empathy and solutions. I didn\'t fight boy friends because I didn\'t force my boyfriend to empathy.
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Good morning [이름]!
What happened? Was your boss mad yesterday?
I hope you are okay. I know you can do it!
See you later :)
When I feeling low, I talk with boyfriend first.
>>> I talk to my boyfriend first when I\'m feeling low.
But, he always give me a solution not to empathy.
>>> However, he always gives me solutions and he doesn\'t empathize.
I want to empathy but he is trying to judge the situation and give me a solution.
>>> I hope he empathizes with me, but he judges and offers solutions.
So sometimes he make me more feeling down.
>>> So sometimes I feel sadder.
I have a best friend.
>>> CORRECT!
she always on my side.
>>> She is always on my side.
she more upset than me and swear at the person who made me feeling down.
>>> She is more angry with the people who made me sad.
Also, she did empathy.
>>> She empathize with me.
I feel better after talking to her.
>>> CORRECT!
So, When I feeling down, call both of them to get empathy and solutions.
>>> When I\'m feeling down, I call both of them to get their empathy and solutions.
I didn\'t fight boy friends because I didn\'t force my boyfriend to empathy.
>>> I didn\'t fight with my boyfriend because I don\'t want to force him to empathize with me.
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