first phone english

2011-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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i was do phone english. first time it was too short time for me doing it is better for english. i will do best for this phone english to finish

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Hi [이름], Thank you so much for dropping by. Don't worry [이름], I will be here to help you. Here are some corrections on what you've made today^^ --Rebecca--   i was do phone english. first time >> I did a phone English class for the first time.it was too short time for me >> The time is too short for me. doing it is better for english. >> Doing it will let me be better in speaking in English.i will do best for this phone english to finish >> I will do my best in my phone English class until it'll be finished.

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