First time

2016-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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I had the first English class after when I graduated university 24 years ago. I'm working in UAE for about 8 month. but I couldn't speak fluently in English. I have been wished to speak fluently in English so I try to play with English until I speak fluently in English. My teacher is Jacey. I'm glad to meet her since she doesn't have Filipino's accent. I've mat a lot of Filipinos working around my company here in UAE. Their minds are very pure but I can't understand their speaking.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, sir [이름]! :)


Happy Friday!

Are you still working? :)

I hope you finish your job soon.


Thanks for taking the time to write your composition today.

I can see you are trying your best to speak in English.

Just keep practicing and I\'m sure you\'ll be a very good speaker someday. :)


Review your grammar and pronunciation corrections and always try to speak in English if possible so you\'ll get used to it.

You have a lot of potential! ^^.


I hope to see you again on Tuesday, next week.

Take care.

Happy New Year! ^.^


--- Teacher Jacey :)



I had the first English class after when I graduated university 24 years ago.

>> I had my first English class again after 24 years.


I\'m working in UAE for about 8 month. but I couldn\'t speak fluently in English.

>> I\'m working in UAE for about 8 months now. But I couldn\'t speak in English fluently.


I have been wished to speak fluently in English so I try to play with English until I speak fluently in English.

>> I wish to speak fluently in English so I try to play with it until I become fluent.


My teacher is Jacey. I\'m glad to meet her since she doesn\'t have Filipino\'s accent.

>> My teacher is Jacey. I\'m glad to meet her since she doesn\'t have a Filipino accent.


I\'ve mat a lot of Filipinos working around my company here in UAE.

>> I\'ve met a lot of Filipinos working around my company here in UAE.


Their minds are very pure but I can\'t understand their speaking.

>> Their minds are very pure but I can\'t understand what they\'re saying.


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