First time
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, sir [이름]! :)
Happy Friday!
Are you still working? :)
I hope you finish your job soon.
Thanks for taking the time to write your composition today.
I can see you are trying your best to speak in English.
Just keep practicing and I\'m sure you\'ll be a very good speaker someday. :)
Review your grammar and pronunciation corrections and always try to speak in English if possible so you\'ll get used to it.
You have a lot of potential! ^^.
I hope to see you again on Tuesday, next week.
Take care.
Happy New Year! ^.^
--- Teacher Jacey :)
I had the first English class after when I graduated university 24 years ago.
>> I had my first English class again after 24 years.
I\'m working in UAE for about 8 month. but I couldn\'t speak fluently in English.
>> I\'m working in UAE for about 8 months now. But I couldn\'t speak in English fluently.
I have been wished to speak fluently in English so I try to play with English until I speak fluently in English.
>> I wish to speak fluently in English so I try to play with it until I become fluent.
My teacher is Jacey. I\'m glad to meet her since she doesn\'t have Filipino\'s accent.
>> My teacher is Jacey. I\'m glad to meet her since she doesn\'t have a Filipino accent.
I\'ve mat a lot of Filipinos working around my company here in UAE.
>> I\'ve met a lot of Filipinos working around my company here in UAE.
Their minds are very pure but I can\'t understand their speaking.
>> Their minds are very pure but I can\'t understand what they\'re saying.
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