First time to play bowling in the club.
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It was the first time to have bowling club.
>> It was my first time to be in a bowling club.
Bowling alley is near at my house.
>> The bowling alley is near my house.
So, I went to home first and went bowling alley.
>> So, I went home first then I went to the bowling alley.
We met at 2:50 nd the owner of the bowling alley instructed how to play bowling.
>> We met at 2:50 and the owner of the bowling alley instructed us how to play bowling.
I played bowling before when I went to Gangju. When I play bowling I can relieve my stress.
>> Correct
Today my score was 85 and 70. Second time I didn\'t do well. But it was first time so I will do my best continueously.
>> Today, my score was 85 and 70, I didn\'t do well on the second time. However, it was just the first time, so, I will do well continuously.
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