First time to write mail.

2012-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

학생이 쓴 원문

Eventually, I was use an English skill to write e-mail to account in Beijing,Chine. Our team manager is always send a mail, but he was busy. So, I was under the necessity of writing. It was not difficult because of using simple sentence, but hard work to person who is first time like me. Anyway, I am happy today Have nice dream~ ♥

강사 첨삭

Hi Hung-Jun, I am happy that you have to write an e-mail to China. ^^ Grab the chance to apply what you learned in English. The more you practice, the more you become better. Just be open to improvements. I have faith in you! T. Michelle ^^ Eventually, I was use an English skill to write e-mail to account in Beijing,Chine.>>> Eventually, I had to used my English skill to write an e-mail to an account in Beijing, China.Our team manager is always send a mail, but he was busy. >>> Our team manager is the one who always sends a mail, but he was busy.So, I was under the necessity of writing.>>> So I was under the necessity to write. It was not difficult because of using simple sentence, but hard work to person who is first time like me.>>> It was not difficult if using simple sentences, but it is a hard work for person first timer like me.Anyway, I am happy today>>> Correct, just be careful not to forget your punctuation at the end of your sentence. ^^Have nice dream~ ♥ >>> Correct >>> OR: Have a nice dream! :)

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