First time to write mail.
학생이 쓴 원문
Eventually, I was use an English skill to write e-mail to account in
Beijing,Chine.
Our team manager is always send a mail, but he was busy.
So, I was under the necessity of writing.
It was not difficult because of using simple sentence, but hard work to person
who is first time like me.
Anyway, I am happy today
Have nice dream~ ♥
강사 첨삭
Hi Hung-Jun, I am happy that you have to write an e-mail to China. ^^ Grab the chance to apply what you learned in English. The more you practice, the more you become better. Just be open to improvements. I have faith in you!
T. Michelle ^^
Eventually, I was use an English skill to write e-mail to account in Beijing,Chine.>>> Eventually, I had to used my English skill to write an e-mail to an account in Beijing, China.Our team manager is always send a mail, but he was busy. >>> Our team manager is the one who always sends a mail, but he was busy.So, I was under the necessity of writing.>>> So I was under the necessity to write.
It was not difficult because of using simple sentence, but hard work to person who is first time like me.>>> It was not difficult if using simple sentences, but it is a hard work for person first timer like me.Anyway, I am happy today>>> Correct, just be careful not to forget your punctuation at the end of your sentence. ^^Have nice dream~ ♥
>>> Correct
>>> OR: Have a nice dream! :)
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